09-05-2009, 05:35 PM
This is part of my school photography assignment. These are the first couple shots Ive taken let me know what you think.
![[Image: 3888510967_f0b63d292f.jpg]](http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2645/3888510967_f0b63d292f.jpg)
![[Image: 3889303558_e2ece9a305.jpg]](http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2547/3889303558_e2ece9a305.jpg)
![[Image: 3888509837_d87a9bf8ab.jpg]](http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3444/3888509837_d87a9bf8ab.jpg)
![[Image: 3888511313_5bedbcbffb_b.jpg]](http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3442/3888511313_5bedbcbffb_b.jpg)
09-05-2009, 06:46 PM
very nice photos Thomas,
#1 and #2 seems a bit too dark. apart from that very nice set of photos.
Is there a story behind this set of photos?
#1 and #2 seems a bit too dark. apart from that very nice set of photos.
Is there a story behind this set of photos?
09-06-2009, 09:17 PM
nice set of photos!
i like #3 and 4.
Just some comments:
the separation between your model and background is not really enough in some of your pictures. Separation is very important in B&W photos as the photo relies purely on the contrast to separate objects. Either use object colour/different greytone and/or light source to create the separation or you have to do it in photoshop during postprocessing.
i like #3 and 4.
Just some comments:
the separation between your model and background is not really enough in some of your pictures. Separation is very important in B&W photos as the photo relies purely on the contrast to separate objects. Either use object colour/different greytone and/or light source to create the separation or you have to do it in photoshop during postprocessing.
09-06-2009, 09:30 PM
#1 and #2 are too dark. #3 and #4 are nice! How are you post-processing your shots?